I like both versions James. Love that you are experimenting with approaches and loosening the reins on style. You are a very eloquent writer and sincere and wonderful person. I love the open embrace of the quirkiness, your sense of humor, and celebrate the out-coming. Especially appreciated this line. "Learning to live authentically is like finally understanding the punchline to a joke that's been your life" I can so relate. : )
I like both versions James. Love that you are experimenting with approaches and loosening the reins on style. You are a very eloquent writer and sincere and wonderful person. I love the open embrace of the quirkiness, your sense of humor, and celebrate the out-coming. Especially appreciated this line. "Learning to live authentically is like finally understanding the punchline to a joke that's been your life" I can so relate. : )